Jonathon Burket 5/4/96 P.O. Box 29805 Los Angeles, CA 90029 Genero Capshaw, Agent The Literary Bridge P.O. Box 10593 Sedona, AZ 86339 Thanks for your response to my query of 2/12/96. Rather than the entire MS originally required, or the three chapters of your second request, please allow me here a compromise: five chapters. As mentioned in the cover letter, THIN LINE begins with a difficult victory through the court system. Within successive chapters, the protagonist is led from considerations of law to its most basic premise, ethics among men. This leads in turn to examination of the fundamental man, his ancient origin and the birth of his beliefs. Further, that it is the perversion of original records which has led to the compromise of current beliefs. Man is but misled. His greater strength yet sleeps under the heavy blanket of tradition. THIN LINE should provide a foundation for reawakening ... and empowerment of the self. An appropriate sampling of this theme is presented in Chapters 1, 17, and 25-27. Return of this material is unnecessary. An envelope has been provided, though, for response.   Sincerely,   Jonathon Burket P.S. I've been recently fortunate in the publication of essays in smaller forums. As mentioned by previous fax, if your capacity cannot embrace publication of THIN LINE, I can offer five other MSS, fiction and nonfiction, or any suitable collection of essays and/or poems for your alternate consideration. |